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Her beauty was amazing
Her eyes made you fall in love
And thank the Lord in Heaven
That He sent her from above

That He made a smile so contagious
In a child that He gave to us all
To show us the importance of life
Isn't about longevity at all

He showed us how much the smallest things mean
And what a difference one person can make
He branded her memory into our minds
And when He took her, made our bodies ache

As we shed tears of sorrow
That we are blessed with her presence no more
We should always remember
That now this angel can soar

And she is looking down
Still smiling that same smile
As she stands next to God
Watching us all the while

Haylee, we'll always miss you
And love you as we always have
We will smile when we remember
Instead of being sad

Baby, you're safe in His arms now
In peace for eternity
You are in all of our hearts and minds
And you will always be

------
Jessica Fausnaugh


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The following comments are for "Haylee"
by jfausnaugh

Jessica
My condolences if this was your loss. It sounded like the words of a young girl - maybe a highschool student - on the loss of a friend in an untimely death.

Felicia

( Posted by: FeliciaStone [Member] On: September 26, 2005 )





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