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Junkyard, Beauty Queen, And Three Dogs Wee

Went for a drive in a rattletrap
And nearly put to sea

When rounding the curb
The trap came to be

Airborne and sailed
Over chicken fricassee

Junk said to queen
How do three dogs be?

Queen said Junk
Watch out for that tree

Trap, by then, had
Gone down on one knee

And Junk managed only
By the width of a flea

To avoid funking-up trap
And havoc calamity

Came to rest dangling over
The bridge by the sea.


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Charmr


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The following comments are for "Junkyard, Beauty Queen, And Three Dogs Wee"
by Charmr

Nice One Junk!!!
A downright charming and enjoyable read. High-five on a crafty job.

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 30, 2005 )





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