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Lardy arms and chip fat thighs,
Bulging tummy, too many pies,
Wrinkled cleavage on display,
All to see on summer's day,
Oily hair,unshaven pits
Crater face amok with zits,
Sprouting hair, bikini line,
Just too lazy to take time,
Bitten nails with grime under,
Too much booze, Friday's chunder,
Nicotine stains on the molars,
Can't be solved by diet cola.

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Damian Hutchinson


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The following comments are for "Human Refuse"
by Tarquers

Human Refuse
I have to admit I got a kick out of this. I drink diet pepsi. I have had days when I have gone to Mcdonalds and ordered a quarter pounder with cheese and fries and then my famous diet drink, I even giggle, but I hate the non diet stuff, lol, too sweet. Enjoyed.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 23, 2005 )





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