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You have cast a spell which I fear will not lift
Thirteen years plays out like a long game of parcheesi
By a stove fireplace with a crusting pot on board the fire
And I saw your face in my dreams all over again
As though this is your form of revenge
Deafening in my ears to be beaten into the ice behind your house
In that pleasant little park again and again
I am still fearful
Afraid that one day I will be imprisoned for real
For sexual harassment this time
Not just a prison of asexual love

I am afraid that the memories of your face shall decay
And all that shall be left is your forest green sweater
And your spell that will never leave me alone

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The following comments are for "You have cast a spell"
by claudita

You made me laugh
Lol. This poem is so old I don't actually remember for sure what I was talking about but it certainly wasn't about that. *evil smile* I think it was more about evil fantasies than anything concrete.

( Posted by: claudita [Member] On: September 23, 2005 )

Evil smile
Claudita, I have to say reading this my mind went in several directions, but then Fairplay's comment made it complete...laughing. I enjoyed your evil smile here. Look forward to reading more of you.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 23, 2005 )

Claudita&asexual love...
Hi...Thanks Fairplay, for me you did, wanted to do but, could not...I just hate it I have no one to dream about, if you get my drift...

and damn the asexual love, just kidding...if you can't find nobody to love, love yourself, right?
just kidding, again. (I wish)

Anyway, I could picture myself in younger days
and it gave me quite a smile to read this, enjoyed, Claudita...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: September 23, 2005 )

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