A NEW THREAD!!!
by Robert Walker (Member) - published: September 13, 2005
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Ok, here's the format.
Poetry (300 words)
Prose (300 words)
Poetry

Both categories can be in any style you wish, just stick to the story, and let 'er roll.

You get it right? Ok, I suppose I would have to start this thing.

She's insecure
He's overbearing
Heavenly thoughts of sharing
The ultimate conquest of his young life
, but never a thought of caring
She'll make him a man
he'll make her a wife.

Into the night the lovers dance
in the tempest of full adoration
the beginnings of an eternal romance.

The old reservations still nag her mind,
"Am I too fat?" or "What did he mean by that?"
Love is not a slayer, but kind.

Or so her heart felt, lost in his eyes
His gaze of ice, made her heart melt.

Love's lending a million years
to her lover's tears,
as he fell to the dirt, and looked up to the sky
He cried, with a heart as open as hers, "Why?"

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The following comments are for "A NEW THREAD!!!"
by Robert Walker

Trick or Treat
“Many a true word spoken in Jest”

Life is for living but play by the rules
Falling in love is only for fools
Sure women can match almost any man
When others decide. Just take Pakistan

You could ask your mum or even your dad
Later there’s many wished that they had
Or use your computer search till your blind
All shapes and sizes on there will you find

Go to the pub all night you will ogle
Time goes on when using “Beer Goggles”
The vision you gain might be in your head
Wake in the morning see what’s in your bed

Search with your money there’s value in gold
Some even charge by the hour (I am told?)
Don’t worry about health, trust in your lover
Or trust in yourself. Try using a rubber!

There’s clubs and experts will give you a hand
Find some employment you might understand
When “Dicks on the Dole” (I stole that line!)
“Living on Handouts” just has to be fine

Do it laid back? Let partners choose you
But set out your stall as “All people do”
Enhance your appearance. Be sure to smell nice
You get only one stab, before they think twice

Mind over matter, is the way “I would choose”
Say what’s on your mind. Matters not if you loose!
It works please believe me, then listen to this
Say the right words and don’t “take the piss”

Then if you score, I bet you’ll feel great
What’s in the contract? Don’t leave it too late
Unwritten contracts should never be breached
Some understanding will have to be reached

Keep things in balance right from the start
Don’t be the person to break someone’s heart
Your own self-respect should take second place
Pull Out with care don’t let them loose face

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: September 14, 2005 )

victim....
blind men can see....motto's

( Posted by: Judi1 [Member] On: September 16, 2005 )

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