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Author's Note:
an excerpt from Innocent (a collection of poems in progress) Found poetry, to be more specific. Each line was not sought out by the author but rather sought the author. Moments, words, & symbols of innocence: involuntarily recorded and now repackaged in individual themes for your own consumption. Enjoy!



BAKERY IN THE HEART OF
FREE AIR
SOBER LIKE A DRUNKEN SAILOR

[07/09/05]


------
"...with a shot of gin
a night of rowdiness
stars fall from the sky

Drinking heavily from sky's thunder
heart shattered by lightning
I burst into laughter"

--Georges Bataille


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The following comments are for ""SALT""
by poliArch

on SALT
great on many levels. I'm always drawn to your work. I think it takes many pieces placed together to get one big picture.

This is a good one solo.

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: September 11, 2005 )

Lans: Grazie!
Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

Eventually my goal is for each piece to have the ability to stand both alone and in a symbiotic manner. I'm looking forward to that challenge when it arises.

Lino

( Posted by: poliArch [Member] On: September 15, 2005 )





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