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--Some Days You Feel--

You know
a dirty car
with dusty windows
(hard to see through)
and low tires.
Shows how one feels
about one PM
on a mid July day.
just wanting a shower
some food
and a glass of wine.

By: David E. Howerton

Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game

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by bhagwandave

low rider
with the price of gas these days I'm trying to modify my truck to run on wine, I like the comparisons here.....nice job

( Posted by: poetryman [Member] On: September 8, 2005 )

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