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Fly on, by silent wings of love
Gentle breezes carry me away
Sweet persuasion
With thoughts of you
To get me through the day

Sail on, by crashing waves we live
Changing tides wash away the tears
Sweet fragrence
To be near you
Disappearing are all my fears

Walk on, through windy Autumn woods
While leaves of myriad colors fall
Sweet love
Send me not away
But let it be my name you call


Michael Andrews



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The following comments are for "Fly On"
by straylyte

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ah, equating love and the hopes of it being reciprocated with the beauty of nature was a great touch, I enjoyed the images you painted with your words....peace

( Posted by: poetryman [Member] On: September 8, 2005 )

Great Imagery
I love the last stanza. Fall is one of my favorite time of year. Especially "while leaves of Myriad colors fall" I enjoyed this read alot, thanks!


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 8, 2005 )





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