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I ran away today from all the hate and pain.
I escaped to my own reality and cried.
My best friend lied to me and I cried
My mother died I'm still crying the postman stumbled upon her body.
Nobody cares Iím still crying
No one knows were all dying
Little do you know my soul is flying up and away from all the pain.
I am all alone and the only one left sane.






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Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?


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The following comments are for "cried and crying"
by thesadpoet

cried and crying
i love this poem. as i read it i wanted to start crying. don't know what else to say. keep up the good work

( Posted by: darkfairy [Member] On: September 6, 2005 )

darkfairy
thanx i sure will

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: September 9, 2005 )

cried and crying
I really like this poem. A thorough cry is sometimes the best way to remain sane.

( Posted by: MsTink [Member] On: January 1, 2006 )

crying
this poem is touchy and you seem to be a very semsitive person...it is not sure everyone would cry when his mother die or when he has bad situations...but I just feel you are highly sensitive ..I just feel your own tears...maybe because I too would experience the same ..they say that tears are cleansing for pain..do they ?? sometimes I even run away from them,,,sometimes i long for them ...I even wrote two poems about them ....so cry, and clean the pain...hope you will have a good new year with no crying....
may all the happiness find its way to u ..


all the best
Hiba

PS, plz correct the mistakes u have :
noone, im ...etc..

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: January 2, 2006 )

Crazy About Kites
Pain rises
to incredible heights...
when we fly our crazy kites

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 3, 2016 )





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