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Heavenly Bliss

we kissed for an eternity
our lungs about to collapse
the deliciousness outweighing the risk

kissing and fondling
burning and yearning
twisting and turning
swearing and tearing

clothes fall to the floor
her nakedness, a well kept lily
honeysuckle filled to the brim

the scent intoxicating
my loins vibrating
her quiver anticipating

a flight into orbit
floating towards each other
no space, no distance
only our universal constellation

stars kiss
saturn rings
mercury mooned

lowering onto mount wantmore
her eurythmy body jerks
to the music of my throbbing heart
creating shooting stars

the big dipper applauds
bowing to the little dipper
and heaven has once again been visited....

Copyright Bob C Shank

"If I told you my reality, you'd
say I have a great imagination,
If I told you my imagination, you'd
say I've lost touch with reality"-Bob Shank, 2004

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