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Author's Note:
an excerpt from Innocent (a collection of poems in progress) Found poetry, to be more specific. Each line was not sought out by the author but rather sought the author. Moments, words, & symbols of innocence: involuntarily recorded and now repackaged in individual themes for your own consumption. Enjoy!



SPOKE TO THE WHEEL
A ROUND JALOUSIE PIVOTS
FIRST SIGNS OF HOPE

[02/09/05]



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"...with a shot of gin
a night of rowdiness
stars fall from the sky

Drinking heavily from sky's thunder
heart shattered by lightning
I burst into laughter"

--Georges Bataille


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The following comments are for "“CYCLICAL CASES [OUTNUMBER THE HUMANS]”"
by poliArch

short verse
actually I loved the Senryu

"SPOKE TO THE WHEEL
A ROUND JALOUSIE PIVOTS
FIRST SIGNS OF HOPE"


very nice

( Posted by: poetryman [Member] On: September 3, 2005 )

senryu thanku
Thanks poetryman, I'm glad you liked it. To be honest, I wasn't aware of what a Senryu is until you mentioned it.

( Posted by: poliArch [Member] On: September 6, 2005 )





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