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There is this intelligent rabbit , he is very intelligent ..

every day he comes out of his burrow and looks at the world around him,,

he likes the fresh soil around him , the birds on the trees , the big green fields ,


He is a very cute rabbit .. but the rabbit looks around and knows that this is not a perfect world ... he knows how to change it ...but he is just a cute wabbitt with cute red eyes ...


He searches for food ...eats it ... looks around sadly at the world ... and goes back to his burrow...

He keeps thinking how to improve the jungle how to make life better for all around him and he has the answers but he is just a cute intelligent wabbitt...


........What good is it being intelligent if you are just a cute intelligent wabbitt? he says out one day aloud and goes back to his burrow sadly.


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