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a night with my fantasy

invading my dreams
in a romantic chase
oh how thou longst
to hold in a loving embrace

she appears in a "kodak moment"
flashing in and out of my mind
picturing a life with her
is an image I often find

a woman of passion
burning fire and desire
my pillar of strength
begins to rise higher

is this just a dream
a moment caught in bliss
or are you really here
devouring me with your kiss

from soft sensous lips
nibbling my life away
bathe me in my fantasy
until you're here to stay

Bob Shank Aug 16th, 2005
sometimes you meet someone so special,
that you have to question whether or not
it was real or just a dream, that's when
you know that they are the ONE..........



------
"If I told you my reality, you'd
say I have a great imagination,
If I told you my imagination, you'd
say I've lost touch with reality"-Bob Shank, 2004



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The following comments are for "A Night With My Fantasy"
by poetryman

Lovely Poem
Bob ...this poem touched my heart...what a romantic you are...sadly the man of my dreams has no face...still waiting...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 2, 2005 )

Poetryman Shaky
Yeah,bob, Thou knowest it when thou beginst to speaketh like The Bard.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: September 2, 2005 )

Fantasy
Bob,

This sits so well in my heart, does that mean I have found "the one" ? Yep, it sure does!

Wonderful.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 2, 2005 )





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