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Lover's Ride

Floating upon cascading waters
is a human canoe intent on love
little ripples pass by with laughter
scented breezes, what dreams are made of

blowing softly from state to state
across many mountains and plains
settling tenderly upon your lips
removing the shackles of pain

for I am the key, your medicine man
delivered to cast out all spells
calling upon me, in your prayers
trinkets thrown in wishing wells

splashes make waves
as shallop vessels depart
the bigger the splash
the sooner I get to your heart.....

Copyright Bob C Shank



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"If I told you my reality, you'd
say I have a great imagination,
If I told you my imagination, you'd
say I've lost touch with reality"-Bob Shank, 2004



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The following comments are for "Lover's Ride"
by poetryman

I enjoyed the ride
Bob....This poem blew me away...your words are like diamonds...falling from the sky...we catch them and are richer for it...thanks...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 2, 2005 )

Make waves
I have to say "ditto" to Kacee's comment. You sure know how to make big waves with your words.
Beautiful.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 2, 2005 )





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