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Trying to find the truth
But speaking only lies
Actions hidden behind smoke
Nothing is as it seems
But no one is noticing
Pain behind laughter
Tears covered by smiles
Can't you see the torment they hide?
Or is it that you choose not to look?

No one is noticing
But it's hard to see
Though the smoke
Tears cloud your eyes
Is that what keeps you
From viewing the pain
That those around are feeling
Do you not care?
Or is it perhaps...
That you can't find your way
Past your own hurt and fear

A blazing light
A piecing glance
Was all it took
To reveal your soul

Come out from hiding

Believe in yourself, for you are your best encouragement.

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