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As beautiful as the rise of the sun
I pray such power in the lives of my seed
As beautiful as the blooming flower
I pray such purity in what they perceive
As beautiful as the stars above
I pray their dreams come forth below
As beautiful as the song of the freedom
I pray their harmony glorifies and bestows
As beautiful as the gift of love
I pray their sibling nature exhort
As beautiful as trust and peace
I pray much wisdom upon all they know
As beautiful as they were at birth
I pray their lives execute much power
As beautiful as time is to life
I pray so be the flames of their power!

And I Sing Beautiful My Babies Life-

crystyle.copyright2005


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Crystyle Queen Resurrected


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The following comments are for "Beautiful My Babies Life"
by Crystyle

Beautiful My Baby's Life
An enjoyable read :) Intelligent rhyme.

Punctuation Error?: If you are talking about a singular baby, and its life, it would read "Beautiful My Baby's Life" and not "Babies"

:) xxxx

A. Cain

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: September 6, 2005 )





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