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Losing my sister
Was the worst thing ever
For she was so beautiful, compassionate and clever

If ever my heart broke
It was that sunny afternoon
When you departed into the bliss of heaven's bloom

Losing my sister
Was the worst thing ever
A deep cut of our life's savor

I could not fathom this thought alone
Yet I understand this realization
As you were blessed into your spiritual throne

Losing my sister
Was the worst thing ever
For she was so strong, so charming and kinder

crystyle/storm.copyright05

Of your 27th birthday I mourn, yet I appreciate
the blessing of loving you in this life and all to come!


------
Crystyle Queen Resurrected


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