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My heart is breaking and bleeding, he doesnt even notice
Tears, my eyes no longer produce, nobody cares
All I'm trying to do is hold my head up high
I wish my hands could touch the sky
Am he and I living a lie??
Why? Why? Why? I always cry alone at night?
I want to give up all my fights
God looks upon my plight and laughs
Am I daft for staying here as quitely I shed tears?
Where am I gonna be in a couple of years?
I am living in my nightmare the one I swore I would never be in
The time in my life I said wouldnt be me
I was wrong and now I'm singing my broken song
For how long??
God take me away you dont care
You let the people laugh point and stare.

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Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?


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The following comments are for "bleeding heart"
by thesadpoet

His Presence
TheSadPoet;
Enjoyed this poem to certain limits....never give up on faith; there is no hope if you don't have faith.

I remember saying things like that along time ago, when my husband use to abuse me. But just when you think that God is not listening, He is. That's when you will begin to hear His voice. When your tears are falling, you are washing Jesus feet all over again. He is sitting on the right hand of God interceding for you, all you have to do is lean on Him for strength. And I promise, He will heal you. I am an witness to that myself, wait upon Him, you will renew your strength.


Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: August 29, 2005 )

Life without God
Nicely said!

You're on the road to recovery, sadpoet. You're going through a difficult transition, but there's tremendous hope ahead. Life without God is life with hope and promise, though it's hard to see at first!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: August 29, 2005 )

i feel your pain
i too have felt like there was no hope. but if you seround your self with people who love you and are there fore you then things will get better. i love the poem-just so you know.

( Posted by: darkfairy [Member] On: September 6, 2005 )





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