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Diamonds, rubies and even gold
valuable stones, so I'm told
those who have them feel quite rich
those who don't declare "life's a bitch"

Such value we place on material things
equating committed love with diamond rings
will a giant stone mean you love more
or turn you into a jewelers whore

love should be priceless and never bought
a true lesson we've all been taught
search the mines, the ground and heaven above
you'll find the rarest gem is unconditional love


Copyright Bob C Shank
if you happen to find the rarest of gems
respect it, cradle it, cherish it and guard it
with all your heart...for you are truly rich

------
"If I told you my reality, you'd
say I have a great imagination,
If I told you my imagination, you'd
say I've lost touch with reality"-Bob Shank, 2004



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The following comments are for "The Rarest Of Gems"
by poetryman

best gem
good one, bob. not that this theme hasn't been visited before but your rhymes and the truth that you say is worth the rarest of gems. keep the poems coming.

( Posted by: maimai [Member] On: August 31, 2005 )

Bob
Your poetry is the rarest of gems and we are richer for having read it....Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 2, 2005 )





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