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Maria swaying like a delicate flower petal in a ruffled green dress and fur coat
Maria clutching the blue jacket draped over her shoulders with kissible lips clearing her throat
Maria washing the neighbour's car with her hair floating magically through the wind
Maria innocent and dressed in black telling all that she has sinned
Maria rocking her body in a beautiful bikini on the beach
Maria on the steps of a Mayan temple cheeks as rosy as a peach
Maria serving drinks in a bar while tilted to one lovely side
Maria throws her head back into the sea and tastes the salty tide
Maria's face alone except for her captivating dreamy brown eyes
Maria the All-American girl in a cowboy hat for the guys
Maria in a net of green with a beaming smile
Maria wandering past gardens of roses pondering for awhile
Maria staring across endless ocean into the Caribbean sun
Maria dancing in a nightclub having tons of fun

Maria doesn't know I have this complete collection of Maria Coins
But I wish she did

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The following comments are for "Maria Coins"
by claudita

Visions of Maria

I like the images you've drafted here, and the recitation style. I don't, however, understand the reference to the coins. I feel as though I am missing the biggest piece - could you enlighten me?


( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: August 28, 2005 )

Maria once said something about pictures on coins so I thought about what Maria coins would look like in my head. Thats about the best and safest answer I can give you.

( Posted by: claudita [Member] On: August 28, 2005 )

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