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who said you could read my mind?
discover the underestimated power of 17?
i'll hire a lawyer without a face
to sue for trespassing on private property

disengage yourself, please
forget who i am
let your misconceptions go
and fall for me again

who said you could change the rules?
makes them more suitable for your tastes?
good thing i never followed them to begin with
who said you could use your smile as a weapon?
you make me melt and i feel unsafe

disengage yourself, please
forget who i am
let your misconceptions go
and fall for me again

who said you could look at me like i'm open and see through?
i try to remind myself that i don't need you
who said you could play with me?
make me think twice about what i should say?
i'm really not in the mood to be self conscious today.

who said you could?
i never did.


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The following comments are for "who said you could?"
by kailani24

Wow
Awesome title for the song, and terrific usage of repetition to drill your focus on emotion into my memory!

There is a very powerful sense of interrogation in these lyrics, and whoever this song is about has obviously left you with more questions than answers.

The chorus in this tune is DOPE. I can almost see some hard rock or metal band rocking this one right now...great work!

From one songwriter to another, this song is a classic, and I'm going to check out more of your stuff right away! PEACE.

( Posted by: Jayson Carter [Member] On: July 29, 2002 )





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