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Experienced Type Thing

You know the kind.
Alone at the end of the bar,
sipping an expensive wine.
Her glances arenít just circumstance,
nor is it romance,
itís her game and youíre in the palm of her hands.
She is in control
of your body your mind
your wallet you are her goal.
Lucky for you she didnít set her sights too high,
and what do ya know she lives close by.
She picks up her coat and says Iíll be in the car.
You pick up the tab and make a mental note to come back to this bar
Her hand placed precisely
just enough to graze your balls every left.
An hour to go 5 blocks
to me sounded perfect.
I was actually getting scared.
Then she showed her pair
foreplay is ok with me
long as itís done directly.
Her place was nicely decorated with conventional modern art.
But there was an aroma that ran throughout
of her past lovers that she merely forgot to throw out.
This woman knows exactly how to
Make you want her more and more.
But thatís when sheíll not want you,
so you call a cab and find the door.
but just before
you screw and you do it to her
like she is doing you.
When your done
she thanks you and says it was fun.
Yeah, thatís it.
Donít look for answers or reasoning.
Just get over it.
You are out that door
faster than a 5 dollar whore.
Hey no attachment of some clingy broad.
Who wants to broaden your horizons
and make some compromises.
Itís better this way.
You saw her comingÖ.. a mile away.
You saw the trap and you jumped in.
She opened her mouth Öyou stuck it in.
What can you say?
A prescription should helpÖ
3 Ė 4 weeks youíll be ok.


If a poet ruled the world......what a pleasant place it would be!

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The following comments are for "Experienced Type Thing"
by LamemansTerms

yeah I wouldn't condone paying for a damn thing in fact if anyone is going to be paid around here it's going to be me!!! thanks for your comment.

( Posted by: LamemansTerms [Member] On: August 29, 2005 )

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