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i was Laughing
and as i bent down to pick up my bag
I spotted something...
i stopped Dead
it was so close i could touch it
so near i could feel it's presence
i felt a longing
a want
a need
i could only gaze
realizing what had once
been so close
was actually so far
and i began to Laugh again
for all these thoughts
came from the sight
of your shoes.


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The following comments are for "your shoes"
by englishgal16

must have been the new air jordans, a $185 pair of sneakers will do that to you everytime....lmao

sometimes just a glimpse or a scent of a loved one can "perk" us up....a refreshing write indeed....peace

( Posted by: poetryman [Member] On: August 25, 2005 )

actually blue and yellow sauconys

( Posted by: englishgal16 [Member] On: August 26, 2005 )

Far Away From Funny
the distance between me
and your funny shoes...
is many smiles away

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 9, 2016 )

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