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By countless spending candles
Have these very words been shared
From all before borrowed
They are but now
Represented mines

Upon encoded
Science-altered page
Through transformed thoughts
Beyond words found
Transliterated finds

"Priceless gift thankful
Forever cherished honour
Glass raised..."


8/22-23/05



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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011






























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The following comments are for ""To Poets""
by Bobby7L

To Poets
Indeed

I liked this.

After a slow wander through to clarify meaning, it makes a nice flowing recite in second reading.

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: August 25, 2005 )

Glass Raised...
...to poets.

I agree with A. Cain on all counts. I like the new sig, too.

This sounds so good spoken "flowing recite" as A. Cain said.

I liked "transliterated finds". I read "minds" first! That's a good score on that phrase...

Nice poem, Bobby. I like it very much.

LkN0.1.H

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: August 25, 2005 )

A,Cain & Lans
Thank you ladies.

A.Cain- When title is added to final line, completing "toast," last stanza becomes a 5/7/5.

Lans- Am greatly appreciative...

B7L.1.SA.6500'.*

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: August 26, 2005 )

Bobby...
How enlighteningly cryptical, dear sir. Eat your porridge and carry on (my wayward son).

( Posted by: strangedaze [Member] On: August 26, 2005 )

strangedaze
Andy! Good to have you here. A glass for this fine lad, please..."Raised glass...to poets!"

"Let's drink..."

Bobby7L

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: August 28, 2005 )

windchime
Lucie- Your reading and letting me know is greatly appreciated, as I consider you to have/be powerful "Voice" at Lit.

Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: August 31, 2005 )

Tina Louise/ Glass raised
Tina- Extravagant clue of visit is much appreciated...

By manipulating words, writer can make things happen...Motivation/Intent?...Variable.

To poets,


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: September 16, 2006 )





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