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While loving you, I neglected me
To wrapped up in your “love” to see.
All the time I wasted, waiting for you
To love me back, and now it’s true…

That love is not love when it is one sided
Talk about being naïve and misguided!
It wasn’t love you shared, but merely lust
Ashes to ashes dust to dust.

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