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Misty tears of heart,
River of souls a-pouring,
Into the mold.

Crafted emotions,
flowing hither in the mist,
another recieved.

Turned and Tossed,
Second hearts found in love,
Unison of tears.

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Art is addicting, an addict am I,
truth is I, the truth am I, the truth a lie!


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