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My Inner Bitter Little Fucker

I take this very serious.
Getting my fill...Just lieing still.
2 things that make me delirious.
But my laughter runs deeper
than my pain.
There in which lies the problem,
and my Shame.
A dependency
to my addictions.
Conflictions with Time ....
And in Time lies urgency.
Confining with a Silver Lining.
The Struggle with trying to get out,
while trying to get them in me.
It's Killing me...
So I ride with the tide,
and cry with the little boy
that still dreams that it's gonna be alright.
Better days are just up ahead.
Nothing has slipped away.
And none of this is ever said.
For such a good boy,
I sure found a lot of bad toys.
My inner child has become a bitter little fucker.
Who isnít getting any younger.
When will this subside?


If a poet ruled the world......what a pleasant place it would be!

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The following comments are for "My Bitter Inner Child"
by LamemansTerms

bitterness undressed
how long does childhood last?...forever, and go with it, it's actually one of the reasons some can write so well, we need to, it helps us relate, heal amd share from whence we came....nice piece

( Posted by: poetryman [Member] On: August 21, 2005 )

thanks poetryman your words are true--it is like therapy and looking back on all after it is said and done I actually remember some thanks

( Posted by: LamemansTerms [Member] On: August 21, 2005 )

My Bitter Inner
I really enjoyed this poem. I consult with my child almost daily I must admit. I fear the thought of her being rewritten. I even avoid my home country so no mistake I make in adulthood can change the purity of her echo.

It's not wrong to acknowledge that your child would be disappointed in you. That realization is one of the only ones that I believe can halt bad progress.

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: August 24, 2005 )

RE: A.cain comment
Thank you for taking the time to read my piece, I really appreciate that and yeah the bitter disapointment it would be. I am worried that if they i mean we(my little/bitter dude and myself meet there might be some more than words. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. they are always welcome and more than appreciated.

( Posted by: LamemansTerms [Member] On: August 24, 2005 )

Nothin Good
My mother always said when you can say nothing good say nothing at all. ITs a shame when bad language has become acceptable to the masses. Ano'wara

( Posted by: Anowara [Member] On: January 29, 2006 )

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