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--reading in bed--

Filled with exhaustion
trouble sleeping
pick up book
from pile by bed
finish 50 to 100 pages
eyes burning
read last sentence
4 or 5 times
drop book
turn out light

By: David E. Howerton

Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game

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by bhagwandave

Reading in bed
Umm.. I don't like this piece, and it doesn't show the effort that appears to have gone into your other posted works. On the bright side, it does radiate the atmosphere of someone who is seriously overtired.

*sheepish smile*

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: August 25, 2005 )

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