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through my eyes the world is bleak
i love and dread each new week.

through my eyes the life i lead is pointless
it cries in desperaton for more.

you don't know me, you wouldn't care if you did
my fate is sealed by the coffin lid.

oh,! its saturday you say?
well i guess the world will be ok.

Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?

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The following comments are for "through my eyes"
by thesadpoet

Through my Eyes
I liked this, short and to the point. But people has to Encourage themselves to make life better for theirself. We have to make our own choices in life.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: August 19, 2005 )

not so sad
out of all of your poems this one is by far the best. you seem to have alot of darkness in your life but it seems that it dosen't effect your scenc of humor(or maybe sarcasum) anyway i like all of your stuff and hope you fell better

( Posted by: darkfairy [Member] On: September 6, 2005 )

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