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You need a new place to put things
Everything scattered around
Time to pick up the pieces
And, to see at what you have found

So much time and emptiness
So many friends, but loveless
I hope these words find you
Console, possess and crown you


The following comments are for "Heal"
by why me?2

I liked it, but not nearly as much as Jess did. I thought there were a few problems with the last half of the second stanza that kept me from marking it higher.

( Posted by: MKMINION [Member] On: July 26, 2002 )

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