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Though gorgeous you may be
And friendly to the fall,
You are too faint to see,
Invisible to all.

Walking in town peacefully
Sparkling through the cracks of the walls,
You couldn't understand how we,
Acted so shunning in that hall.

Though through it all you never agree
That we just see you bawl,
It is you who acts indifferently,
To see the leaves of fall.

Crying is your specialty
We see you've always crawled,
You were born to be free,
And yet you never call.

------
Kellie Lachata


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