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When I saw you
You took my hand
When I first talk to you
You made me melt in the sand

Closing my heart, so you wouldn't hurt me
Falling a part with the lost of not finding him
When opening up to the one that been right next to me

Wishing and praying for someone to compete me
when not knowing that he was right next to me
Beginning to tell myself not to get contemptible
Already doubting myself into thinking that I don't derive him

When I saw you take my hands
I told myself that every woman should have a man like that
to walk with hand in hand
That can fill you up with passion and romance

Wishes and dreams that I have dreamt
Could this one make any sense?
Could this one make my dreams beam?
If not, then I'll make it be

For me, life is too short to just only dream dreams
It's reality that wants me
So take my hand and be my man

That man that only wants me
The man that can with stand being by me
Take me were no other man has taken a girl like me

Please me in ways no ocean can seek
Find my love in ways no map can discove
Hold me in ways no clothing could hold
Care for me in ways no medicine could care

You don't have to love, my love
You don't have to change for my ways
You don't have to speak one word

Just take my hand like you did that day
Just take my falling hand and not my falling heart
Just be the man that looks me in my green eyes

Then you will see all my lines inside
The bad, the good, the dreams, the heart that needs your palm
Then I will take you in my soul
with the hands that you now hold

Anna E M

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