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life doesnt seem fare sometimes
but thats the thing isnt it? its not suposed
to feel fare to really be fare.
most people think that fare is
just them getting their own way and
not caring what
happens to the other person.

sometimes even thats not fare
even if your the one getting your own

i know this is a strange way to say things
but im trying something new
something noone else likes to do
talking like this i mean
to say things that i want
and not have to worry about the respnoce.
the end


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