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Sad and lonely street
A place I know
Itís where we always meet
Itís where you never show
In my favorite bar
my unpleasant head
Upon that shooting star
While laying in my bed
So many faces
Without any traces
Immaculate trails
to those invisible places
where I rest when I fail
Not near here
But never that far
Itís always closer than you think
But further than the farthest star

lamemansterms

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If a poet ruled the world......what a pleasant place it would be!
~L.T


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