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My angel of hell

I see your wings of darkness within the eyes of many

I wonder if youíre a warning

Or just protecting that which is meaningless

I see you when I close my eyes,

When the darkness peers through my blinds.

I see you soar, and as you do,

Crimson spreads though out the sky,

Like red rain that washes away all that is compressed

I hoped for only the best

And in returned got internal rest

My angel of hell

Why are you here?

I see you, yet never do

Your wings of black

Blacker then the night combined

I only hoped that you would save me from my own weaknesses

Yet you feed on that, keep me lonely, dark and wounded

My angel of hell, when will this stop?

Tears of which only humanity can shed

Your figured printed within my head

Every corner I turn, will remain unworthy of your standards

Angel of hell, will you tell me what I have done?

Faithless I stand, and still I cannot see

Why you protect that which is meaningless

I see you, and I hope to see you again

Is it the darkness that you bring to my head?

Do I like it, or do I remain scared

Angel of hell, would you protect me, if life came in the way?

Or is your purpose to make me stay?

Angel please forgive

For only you can tell

I hope the light will touch me soon

And rid me from this hell

I ask only one thing in return

Until I do what I hope to do

Stay with me,

Protect me at will; donít let a single cut come within my grasp

Angel of hell, I hope that you do well, and yet at the same time fail, and lose your wings that you donít deserve.

If only...I could last til winter


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