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Most times our spirit
Is all that stands between
Us and the trials in life
We must all go through.

The strength of the
Spirit as far as your
Feelings or ability to
Defend yourself go,
Can make or break you.

Therefore it is best to
Keep your spirit up
As much as you can
Each day.

This strength of spirit
Will help you when
These kinds of trials
Get underway.

Many times in life
Iíve been tested
But my reserves have
Seen me through.

For in good times stock
Iíve invested
It has worked for me
And it will work for you.



------
Charmr


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The following comments are for "Spirit"
by Charmr

charmer,dodidoo
i pledged, and dododoo, i don't like this, la di dah shit...j66666666666666666666666666

( Posted by: jonny666 [Member] On: August 10, 2005 )

J666
Well I'm sure glad I did'nt write this just for you. Thanks for the comment. An excellent example of "Bad press is better than no press at all".............The Junkyard Poet(strikes out again) Not!

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: August 14, 2005 )

Charm and SPIRIT!
thank the Good Lord or Great Spirit that I've got a spirit, an extension of my soul and a life saver as well...I understand your write and "Right On"...yes, write on brother...

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: August 15, 2005 )

Charmers Spirit
Yes I found this write a little off from your others.......still written quite well. Alot of your poems had an unexpected twist in them. This one's character between the lines.....a remarkable wisdom.......one that I admire as well as certainly wish I had the strength of.

I like the comments too....another nice one to find from you Romay........and YES I do know you have been writing for more than the past year...but what I did mean in my comment was writing poetry and posting to share with others.

Respectfully,
Dar~

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 16, 2005 )

Robin and Dar
Thank-You so much for commenting. Comments rule with me. It's not that I do not feel like the piece is'nt art without them. It's just so nice to have fellow poets take their valuable time and spend some on my work that makes it so much the better. Thanks for time as well........Romay

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: August 16, 2005 )





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