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I have a theory
I would like to discuss.
whenever I stop to think
of you, me, alone together,
I always imagine time
slowing to crawl.
The stretching of seconds,
minutes, hours and days,
sweet like warm caramel.
I think about the slow kisses,
the precious touch
of one mouth to another.
Watch the anticipation build
in the half life of wet lips
and the delayed pleasure of pressed flesh,
the lip smacking taste of souls, savored
But when you are all caught up
in the frenzy of a smoking hot kiss,
you already know where itís headed.
That inevitable physical collision,
the crash of dazzling bliss,
when carnal desire takes complete control
and you get lost in it.
But the slow kiss?
That takes more time.
Linger a breath and discover
something new about the object of your kiss.
You may end up going places
you never even knew existed.
A slow kiss is the wine of your lover.
Donít gulp it down.
sip it, savor it.
Play the song of flavors along
your trembling lips
Let the slow, smoldering energy
build and warm you all over.
Free your hands to explore,
let them trace slow trails,
walk tingles on your skin
and watch in amazement
as everything else in life
fades into the background.
Thatís the beauty of a slow kiss.
Then again, itís only a theory.

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The following comments are for "The Theory of Kisses"
by BMartinez

Very good point, very creative approach. I liked it.

( Posted by: silentgoodbye [Member] On: September 1, 2005 )

Forever Waiting
You can slow time
with just a kiss...
eternity can wait...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 2, 2016 )

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