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If Haiku is a poetry burp
A long poem is a fart
choose which one you like to read
for both of them are art

We could argue which is best
but no one would ever win
whether you choose to burp or fart
both are better out than in

Kacee Huggs

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The following comments are for "Burp vs Fart"
by Nitz Kitty

Right you are Kacee. I as you can smell by my works am more of a burp man but I don't hold my nose at the farters.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: August 5, 2005 )

Chapter 1( Chris)
The only reason I wrote this is because xitwound wrote something about Haiku being the burps of poetry and that only lazy people write short those aren't his exact words but that is what I got out of it....
I never meant to say long poetry stinks...I just can't stay interested enough to read it...both can be good ...we all have to choose...what a dull world this would be if all people were the same....thanks for reading and commenting and the rating...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 5, 2005 )

Haiku fart

A good Haiku is more like a fart than a burp: It lingers in the air, it nakes you say "Wow!" to the depth of its brief potentcy.


( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: August 5, 2005 )

What's that smell?
Drsoos...Thanks for stopping by...I appreciate your comments...I guess poetry of any sort is in the mind's eye of the beholder...I hope some of mine left a wift of someting in the air and a smile in your heart...and I'm always up for a good fart joke ...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 5, 2005 )

Oh, clever
Heheh, well, way to go with the rebuttal. I can't say that I can outdo that one. Very good.

( Posted by: xitwound117 [Member] On: August 5, 2005 )

Burp vs Fart
I really thought this would cause a big stink...pun intended...You are very gracious and I am at a loss for words...thanks for stopping by and making a comment...I was only trying to bring some fun to it brought a smile to your face...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 6, 2005 )

brain taxing

You have an excellent point. Personally depending in what mood one is in, I would think counting syllables and meter (sonnets) could be more taxing and long-winded. But to each is own. I like them all. It is just a matter of preference, and what comes natural.


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: August 6, 2005 )

now I have to ask did you write this with me in th back of your mind? KA MA MA, you had to have been thinking of me and I'm honored, I'm what you see is what you get!


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: August 6, 2005 ) vs Pffft
Macbeth... Thanks for point exactly...and it is harder to count syllables to make something worth reading ....Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 8, 2005 )

Yes, Robin...You, Me, and everyone who tries to say something profound in as few words as possible...Keep em are getting better every day...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 8, 2005 )


Hi ya there! This is hilarious and funni. keeping either one in is no good... sorry, I have been away Kacee, I have been very busy...God is using me in a mighty way, the Pastor of the church that I attend ask me to speak on August 21, 2005 to the congregation.,

You are one of a kind..will be sending you a email. keep on keepin on


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: August 8, 2005 )

Thanks for your comment...Glad to hear about your speaking at church...awaiting your email....Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 9, 2005 )

Ka Ma Ma, Thanks...
Kinda' cool, just being SELF, you helped me realize this...actually, quite cool,
just being me(you), I like us, we'll do
in a me is an excellent thought...can you imagine being in a blizzard with someone you could hardly stand or communicate with? Yuck!

Put Mama's picture up yesterday, in my new home, When I see her, I must say I think of you, She's cool with it...

When someone ask, who she is, I say she is my 1st Ka Ma Ma....

Thank you, again...


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: August 10, 2005 )

Intriguing Title
Very clever piece , though it seems symptomatic of our times that a scatologic title becomes invariably necessary to pique the reader's interest in the first place.

( Posted by: RJKT [Member] On: August 11, 2005 )

Thanks for reading and commenting...Just making a rebuttal a little humorous...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 11, 2005 )

Thank you for your lovely comment...we can only be who we are ...then we can be truthful to ourselves and others...Thank you for thinking of me in such a positive way...I am honored...Ka Ma Ma

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 11, 2005 )

It suddenly struck me that though b...s and f...s are certainly better , to paraphase you , without than within -there's always far more where it came from - an inexhaustble supply if you will.

( Posted by: RJKT [Member] On: August 11, 2005 )

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