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I would go back there again
For just a short time,
Or perhaps begin to end
If I were in my prime.

Just one more time;
Youth to misspend
Where every day is
Party time
And every night holds
A new girlfriend.

A time in which there
Are no limits
And great mountains
Are mere hills to climb,
But only if I could meet
You again
Would I consent to
Traverse time.


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The following comments are for "Youth Recaptured"
by Charmr

Youth Recaptured
So true. I often say I would go back but only if I could take my accumulated knowledge with me. Much enjoyed and yes only if you can hook up with Char again.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: August 3, 2005 )

the go back concept

This is a nice written concept; I envy those that can say they would like to go back. In my case, the entire eighties were a blur, and the seventies were a horror, so I would not know where to go back give me much inspiration and ideas to think and write about.



( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: August 3, 2005 )

Beautifully put Charmr!
I think this is my new favorite of yours charmr!

Oh would that this life were just a dress rehearsal for the life to come.What wonderful lives we would lead...confident in the knowledge that everythning we do is mistakes...regrets or recriminations.

But dull!!!!!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: August 3, 2005 )

Yes this is verily among my fave's of your writing. Nice job Charmr.

Happy Anniversary.

love you, and I DO, both you and Char and wonderful people. Glad I had a chance in life to meet you both.


( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 3, 2005 )

Sorry supposed to be
You and Char ARE wonderful people.

Live happy and stay well.

Love always,

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 4, 2005 )

Thanks Nae, Macbeth, Bea, and Dar for all the nice words of support. These mean a lot to me and spur me on to keep writing. I don't have alot of time for writing and commenting or responding for that matter but, I do the best I can. I do feel a little guilty though as to the commenting and responding. Some day I hope to not be working so much and make up for it.

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: August 9, 2005 )

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