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This is the end of everything that ever was,
Every second
Complete annihilation of preexistence
Every atom released, renewed.
This moment is gone
Left only to be half-remembered
By the faceless
The faithless.

She falls softly down from towering pedastools...

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The following comments are for "A Brief History of Time"
by shefallssoftly

dead past

The present is merely a point of perception sliding down a timeline away from past toward the future.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: August 3, 2005 )


We have GWB to thank for that!

Nice work, by far the darkest well written I've read so far of yours.


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: August 3, 2005 )

Casey - time
How could anyone make something so short and yet so dark? How very eloquently you could write about the topic NOW - which really is very hard to define. NOW can never be accurate a word! You are so right about it, 'this moment is gone'... it is already its destiny.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: August 4, 2005 )

Shefalls in Time
I think my screen just flickered.

I'll never know for sure.

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: August 4, 2005 )

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