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Swing your club for me
Nothing political, babe
Gangster glee for thee
Your vintage rage makes me slave

Thoroughbred hater, pay me in kind
Confederate whore, stuck in my mind

I'm a simple man
And I've ungainly pleasures
Your lunatic plan
Your mercenary leisures

I'll follow the script, it's yours to write
Give me a signal, I'll follow your light

Be my Greek seductress
I'll be your household slave-boy
Fly these planes to bliss
Discovering dread, our toy


(Written with Viper9 on a lazy summer's day)


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The following comments are for "Emma's Kitchen Party"
by Bigyellowmonkey

party
wordplay at its best.

( Posted by: wanker [Member] On: August 21, 2006 )





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