Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

Author's Note:
an excerpt from Innocent (a collection of poems in progress)




A DANGLING ONE
IN A TUNNEL OF NOISE
THIS IS ALL OR NOTHING

[30/07/05]


------
"...with a shot of gin
a night of rowdiness
stars fall from the sky

Drinking heavily from sky's thunder
heart shattered by lightning
I burst into laughter"

--Georges Bataille


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "“YELLOW LIGHT(SPEED)”"
by poliArch

powerful image
in this one. Its not quite scary or creepy. Its more of an edge-of-the-seat tension. The scene is climactic

(is that a word?) -Philo

( Posted by: Philo [Member] On: August 5, 2005 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: