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NO matter how it ends up later
At least we have ever met by chance
No need to be tied up
and no promises
As long as we ever shared it
That will do
There are so many fragrant memories in life
I only hope for A Me on your mind


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The following comments are for "Meet by Chance"
by Clark

Clark - meet by chance
Hi Clark! Your subject is very promising, MEET BY CHANCE. But I would like to read something that would break my heart more, make me fall in love some more, awaken my senses some more as to what these 'fragrant memories in life' are. But I liked it, the thought: NO matter how it ends up later/At least we have ever met by chance/ I have the same perspective, but then I wrote something before that goes - I was contented living my life having not known your touch - or something like it... far, far back among my submissions here. :) Thank you for this read, Clark, I'd like to read some more of your writings.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: August 1, 2005 )

Thanks Peter!
Yeah, I do agree. And thanks so much for your nice comments, just like you said I am always grateful for things i have now, even only one meeting or chatting, wishing more instead of being greedy to own more...I will go to read some more of your writings... thanks again Peter!

( Posted by: Clark [Member] On: August 1, 2005 )

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