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Words love and kill
I prefer love and I've killed
Joy pain, show me yours


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The following comments are for "A Special Home..."
by Robinbird

ya'll help me on this one...another Myku Haiku,
my message is words, my special home is here, little Myku has potential, I just didn't say it write...ya'll make this what I feel and I'll give it to you if you want it...

looking for help!


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: July 29, 2005 )

love and kill


Although I am no expert on haiku it is nice to see you post again and read you comments. I like anything with the words "love and kill", and "joy and pain". It gives the feeling of being stuck between two poles. Life is nothing more than a complex contradication.

Nice to see you around girlfreind,

Laura aka macbeth


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: July 30, 2005 )

Robin to Macbeth
Robin via John Thanks for your positive comments. Call me girl. Lost your number. Miss you, Robin.

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: August 2, 2005 )

ground control to Robin

answer your phone!


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: August 2, 2005 )

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