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Addicted to the ecstasy
of the beginnings of passion
I linger in the wastelnd of my soul
searching for a reflection of an angel
denying the evil that rules.

They all kneel in awe
at such utter purity
as i'm crowned the queen of illusion.

------
abi


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by abi

Saddens Me
Even though this poem is so beautiful, it saddens me to know you feel this way. It must be so painful. I pray the evil is temporary and the angel reappears. You will always be a queen. Love you.

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: July 29, 2005 )





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