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i am moving to a place where no one can find me
where no one can break my heart
i am moving to a place deep inside my heart
where nothing is the life
and my past is not my life
isolation
desolation
and soul inhabitation
i am going to shut the door
cause all i get is more more more
pain
death
cancer
loss
heartbreak
all taken all given
so once again i am saying
im locking the door throwing the key
so no one i mean noone can ever hurt me

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