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The decision to be apart was mutual
As was the pain it caused
We both knew it was necessary
In order to secure our future
Three years apart
In preparation for a lifetime
Together

Neither of us know how well go on
Missing our other half for so long
In the end well emerge stronger
Both personally and jointly
Holding onto the thought
Its only three years apart
In preparation for a lifetime together


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"I like to think that the whole world is my friend"


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The following comments are for "Missing You"
by supergranny

Awesome
I really like this I find it really relates to a situation I am in right now and I really enjoyed reading it. Good work keep it up Peace

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: November 27, 2005 )





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