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As I sit here and look at
All this orderliness
Around me, I am pleased;
I am disturbed.

They say I have a knack
For organizing things.
It is true, I have the knack.

But isnít this also a
Trait of the anal

God, I hope Iím not like that.

The orderliness does
Please the eye though
And can make life
Easier, as well.

But I wonderÖ


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The following comments are for "Organization"
by Charmr

on organization

Whatever works-don't brood about it. I personally know where everything is when all is disorganized. When someone tries to "help" and organize my stuff, I become frantic and anxious and I can't find anything. But I also wonder....

Good subject,


( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: July 26, 2005 )

Fairplay and Macbeth, Thanks much for the very nice comments. They are always welcome with utmost appreciation from me......Romay

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: July 27, 2005 )

well, here I go again, can't find one that is not married! well, again I have 0 luck with the men folk...

awe, s#@t, i'm up at 5am, still don't have nothin' to do with order, but, i'm smilin' again.
Lucky wife, my friend as long as you don't b@#$h!
man, i wish i had the knack, i'm gonna' say,
i'm still smilin'...

love to your family and have a great day!


( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: July 29, 2005 )

Ms Robin
Thanks for stopping by and commenting. As to your luck with men, you can't push a rope but, if you're patient my guess would be that one will come along before you know it. Every force has an equal and opposite and this most likely applies to the sexes. They are certainly a force to be reckoned with you know. May Cupid shoot you and Mr Right in the ass! Good luck!.......Romay

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: July 29, 2005 )

Good Write
And THE BEST ORGANIZER ever. Should I comment on the anall retentive part? Naahhh, I won't. Keep up the good work.


( Posted by: Char [Member] On: July 30, 2005 )

The Organized .....Charmr
Good writing on a good subject.

I am trying to get over being too organized. My days have 34 hours, most I lose 10 just on rethinking what could be done better. Being ill has left me with more time to organize and reorganize drawers, shelves, papers.....etc. Placed for everything, boxes tagged, each item has its place....then I decide I need to just move rooms again.......

I liked this poem....Romay, good job.


( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 8, 2005 )

Thanks Char and Dar, that's a rhyme for you. I give it a ten....Romay

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: August 9, 2005 )

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