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i can hear her breathing softly
she is sleeping so tight
to behold her innocent face
i only have tonight


i can see her pupils move
beneath her frail eyelids
and shortly a lovely smile
shes plunged in her sweet dreams


if only i could get in her dreams
i could see who shes dreaming of
when i smell him on her shoulders
i can hardly believe all this time
i ve been fooled with a
hollow love


idont know this lost stranger
even when she says she needs me
but i know still i love her
and this true love will lead me
back to her endless dreams


if only i could get in her dreams
i could see who she s dreaming of
when i smell him on her shoulders
i can hardly believe all this time
i ve been fooled with a
hollow love


but i know deep within my heart
i ll be led to her magical love
yes im the one she will be dreaming of




oh dont tell me u had time for reading my poem but not for rating pleaaaaaaaaase rate and leave comments to help me improve my lyrics


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The following comments are for "to get in her dreams"
by avinar

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Hi there friend,

From a writer to a writer: I wanna say you did a great stuff and personally you have the ability to capture a persons sense with your writings. I wanna suggest something, try writing articles thats quite different from you usually write so that you can explore and improve more. More power to you and Happy writing.

RedAngel

( Posted by: RedAngel [Member] On: July 24, 2005 )





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