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Actions without calculation
Have destroyed intentionís hope

Selfish remarks
Unleash a loath
Shared by those exposed.

Once friends, now foes
Make remarks of their own.

Removed from the pattern
Of days and day goers
Left alone to calculate.

Depleted of their meanings
Lacking in dignity
And initiating hate

Pity points its fingers
To the pride preserved beneath
And overrides
What may have tried
To stay behind
And pray for smiles to keep.

An active change required within
I shall conquer and I will win
Patch up the mistakes that I can
And work to become a better woman.

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